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Post  sew109 on Mon Jun 18, 2007 12:54 pm

Hi Guys,

Vegas is my favourite place on the planet I have put my website back up after failing to get what I thought the Domain Name was worth. If you are thinking of going to Vegas or know anyone else who is get them to have look there is loads of stuff there that is unbiased reviews alot of it s being updated now but there is still loads there.

www.vegasuncovered.com

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Post  xm15nytyme on Mon Jun 18, 2007 1:01 pm

you may want to have an editor go over the content. There are some grammar and usage errors that make reading the site hard.
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Post  sew109 on Mon Jun 18, 2007 2:49 pm

xm15nytyme wrote:you may want to have an editor go over the content. There are some grammar and usage errors that make reading the site hard.

Many thanks could you give me a couple of pages as examples please, its a fun project so I have no money availble for proof reading and I am dyslexic so rely on spell check.
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Post  xm15nytyme on Tue Jun 19, 2007 8:10 am

oh that sucks.

The home page image. "Its" is ownership, "It's" is "it is". That is the most common usage error because it violates the possessive tense rule in favor of contraction.

under gambling tips, there are a few slips that wouldn't be caught by spell checker, as they're real words. I think "tales" is "tables".
"If you are new to a game try playing in the morning when the casino
is less busy then the dealers will be more able to assist you more.
This is particularly useful with craps. I had a nightmare my first time
playing when I shot I kept throwing the dice out of the pit and hitting
people on other tales and couldn't remember my bet odds. The croupier
and other gamblers were fine about it. Things may have been very different
if it had been say 10pm on a Friday night."

"Get an online account and practice before you get out to Vegas. With many of sites, you get free
bonuses every month so you can practice on the casino's money and you may get lucky"

It's a lot of reading, maybe you can ask a few friends to go over the site a bit for you or see if people on the forums will read a couple pages for you.
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Post  sew109 on Tue Jun 19, 2007 9:21 am

xm15nytyme wrote:oh that sucks.

The home page image. "Its" is ownership, "It's" is "it is". That is the most common usage error because it violates the possessive tense rule in favor of contraction.

under gambling tips, there are a few slips that wouldn't be caught by spell checker, as they're real words. I think "tales" is "tables".
"If you are new to a game try playing in the morning when the casino
is less busy then the dealers will be more able to assist you more.
This is particularly useful with craps. I had a nightmare my first time
playing when I shot I kept throwing the dice out of the pit and hitting
people on other tales and couldn't remember my bet odds. The croupier
and other gamblers were fine about it. Things may have been very different
if it had been say 10pm on a Friday night."

"Get an online account and practice before you get out to Vegas. With many of sites, you get free
bonuses every month so you can practice on the casino's money and you may get lucky"

It's a lot of reading, maybe you can ask a few friends to go over the site a bit for you or see if people on the forums will read a couple pages for you.

Thank you very much I have spoken to my Mum and she will go through it for me whilst on holiday. I really appreciate you bringing this up

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Post  Lou on Tue Jun 19, 2007 10:57 am

Sew109, when I used to proof read for the local paper we read it forward to check the story sounded right, and backwards to check the spelling.
I'm sure most people have seen the Cambridge University study (here if you haven't) which proves words don't have to be spelled correctly to be read. When you read backwards you spot far more mistakes, maybe your mum could give that a go Smile
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